
The innocence of childhood squirming to grow
After all, its innocent and doesn’t even know
What it means to be an adult and what they need to learn
As the moment it finds out, it will cease to yearn
The promises we make to our future adult self
Of following the righteous path and never to digress
Suddenly loses its hold in the cacophony of selfishness
Not knowing where to go, we just run amok in absolute aimlessness
And then we make another promise to someone we dearly love
As he/she enters our life from somewhere above
Showering her/him with everything we have ever got
We promise forever togetherness while tying the knot
The promises though soon begin to fall apart
As the love suddenly dries up even from inside the heart
We though continue to remain together, now more as a formality
For the sake of another life who we welcome and wish to love for eternity
The promise is now made to be with her forever
A little doubt though begin to creep in asking if this will stand and break never
And soon, it stands the test of time
As we force them to leave, the moment, they hit their prime
The last promise we now make to each other
Now very well aware, this will also smother
Because we won’t be able to even keep this one
Leaving the other to fend the world on his/her own
As we reach the heavens and look back at our life
Broken promises and full of lies
We request god for one last promise, to not let us be born again
But even before we could hear him reply, a child suddenly begins to cry in pain
जीवन की पूरी कहानी जैसी कविता , emotions very well penned down 👌👌
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Hey, thankyou so much for liking it…i tried doing that..i also like the nostalgic fragrance f ur poems!! 🙂
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It’s beautiful 👌 और आभार कविता की महक पहुंचे जो दिलों तक तो बस लिखने वालों का दिल बाग बाग हो जाए 🙂🙏
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thts true!! 🙂
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🙂
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To think of it “As we reach the heavens and look back at our life
Broken promises and full of lies” these lines hold so true. How beautifully you depicted the life from start to end!❤❤
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hey, thankyou so much, m happy u liked it, thanks again!!!
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Where are you getting images for posts ? Is there a place I can use copyright free images ?
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When you write a post, there is an option to add images. When you click on it, u get three options, to upload from ur computer, from google photos and from Pexel. I normally use pexel photos. They are free. You can also try them out.
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Thanks .. did not know about that. I always searched internet. !
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ohhh…my pleasure.. 🙂
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Wow. Just wow. This is so so good. The promises we make and the things we do. Its so easy to make promises and so difficult to live up to them. But that does not waver our faith on them. We ask for promises even after death.
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Hey, that’s so so true, what u just wrote. I think our world is built around them, promises from our parents, elders, teachers, doctors everyone keep us alive an kicking…m really glad u like it!! 🙂
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Life reality and beautiful childhood is so well written.
Thanks for posting
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hey, thank you so much for your feedback, its great knowing u liked it!!
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It’s very nice really👌😇
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hey, thank you so much, I am really glad you liked it!!!
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It’s my pleasure …I am also glad to know that u understand Words My Writing i.e Which is in Marathi ..Ty☺️😇
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I like Marathi, tried learning it but couldn’t, but since I left Mumbai, whenever i hear or see it somewhere, i remember my time spent there. Its. beautiful language. so my pleasure reading it!!! 🙂
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Yes you said Right Marathi is really beautiful laungauge 😊( Not just because of my mothertongue but also it is )and it’s good thing that due to this u remember your old days that is your memories…😊
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thats true, I love Marathi songs and even though I do not understand them fully, they are still awesomely melodious! Thank you!
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Yes ..Welcome 😇
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🙂
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Beautifully written! 👍🌟
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hey, thank you so much for the appreciation!!!
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You’re welcome! 😃
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